Typo and Grammer Errors Options

[Golden Thief]

When talking to Zeira first time in Halruaa

Zeira: It is not for me to give details....... I tell you this because there can be turning back, not now.

Shouldn't it be: can be no turning back, not now.

[Golden Thief]

A missing letter.

Leina: I...didn't realize anyone was listening.
Reply #2: hen change one to suit the other.

I think the "T" is missing. Should be "Then change one to suit the other."
Spell checker won't catch the hen as wrong.

[Golden Thief]

Found another one I think?

Leina: Instead I shaved it in my backpack ...etc.
Reply #2 their only purpose is to instil more guilt.

I might be wrong but shouldn't "instil" be spelled with two l's ---> instill

[larrienne]

Found another one I think?

Leina: Instead I shaved it in my backpack ...etc.
Reply #2 their only purpose is to instil more guilt.

I might be wrong but shouldn't "instil" be spelled with two l's ---> instill

You think right GT. As with your observations in the above post, my typing leaves a lot to be desired, as does my re-reading... missing letters, (Jan clicks her tongue) tut... I should be ashamed of myself for not noticing such simple errors.
GT. You have written *shaved* insyead of *shoved*. I have checked my original dialogue and see I have written *shoved*. Please, was this a typo error of your own or has *shaved* been mistakenly inserted in the dialogue?
Thanks for those... and guys, I will make a list of all your observations and let Vlad know which ones to change.

[Golden Thief]

I most humblely apologize. Hits self with stick. bangs head on wall.

I make that most greiveous error. my finger hit "a" instead of that letter over on the other side of the keyboard "o".
Your spelling is correct on it.

BTW I just found a work you might use if you want to make a dialog about socks. Back in 1547 they called them "stockes". I bet serval would swear you spelled it wrong.

Cheers

[Golden Thief]

I think this is a typo

In the flirts
Leina: She looks at you with a forlorn look on her face, but she can not disguise the twinkle in those almond "shamed" eyes of hers as she waves back.

Don't you mean: almond "shaped" eyes?

[larrienne]

GT,*Shaped* it should be.

Leina talks to you she's refusing to speak to me and me being all nice to her all the time.
How are the flirts playing out, bearing in mind that whereas Leina isn't interested in love , she does admit to enjoying the warmth a man's arms around her can bring to a cold night.?

This post has been edited by larrienne: Sep 2 2005, 03:20 PM

[Golden Thief]

The options are great and the responses are what I would call normal to me.
Like when you whistle she has smiled and another time is discussed with men.

Some times they pop-up themselves or I can click on talk to her. They are not to often which is good. I like them cause they lead no where but to being freindly.

Oh, one thing I think vlad needs to put in as a check is on the talk about when Leina says she has talked to the Barkeep and there is enough hot water. I have gotten that in an Inn, in the forest and in De' Arnise Keep. It should only happen at an Inn or make one for outdoors by a river cause they smell like dirty "stockes".

I don't think they started until I was in the Underdark. I will go back and see if they happen in Halruaa.

Or it is my PC just has the chrisma.

[Golden Thief]

Nope on my last save in Halruaa she will not talk to me, nor before leaving for Spellhold.

The first save that I have that I can inniate the talk is just after I fought in the cages and won. I must have impressed her.

So that might be why you don't get to talk to her.

[Golden Thief]

Missing "as"

Samuel: Well, I suppose as long she is happy and content, that is all I can hope for.

After "as Long" shouldn't be another "as"

This post has been edited by Golden Thief: Sep 5 2005, 12:40 PM

[Vlad]

Oh, one thing I think vlad needs to put in as a check is on the talk about when Leina says she has talked to the Barkeep and there is enough hot water. I have gotten that in an Inn, in the forest and in De' Arnise Keep.

This is the major problem of BioWare areas - most of them are not flagged or flagged wrong. I can only replace the AREATYPE check for AREA code check, so if you don't visit some of the taverns in Athkatla you won't get this dialogue.

This post has been edited by Vlad: Sep 11 2005, 04:01 PM