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Aug 3 2005, 08:01 PM
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Forum Member Posts: 211 Joined: 26-June 05 |
Thought you might want us to post all the typo and grammer errors in one spot so that whoever is doing the corrections doesn't have to hunt for them posted all over the place.
This only came to after I saw the second one. Also could you tell us how much of the exact text do you need to be able to find and correct it. Here is one. Fake Arundel: Arundel is bleeding......"There is a portal in his room you may use to come back to you world." Wouldn't this be better as "... go back to your world"? Cheers |
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Sep 2 2005, 04:28 PM
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Forum Member Posts: 211 Joined: 26-June 05 |
The options are great and the responses are what I would call normal to me.
Like when you whistle she has smiled and another time is discussed with men. Some times they pop-up themselves or I can click on talk to her. They are not to often which is good. I like them cause they lead no where but to being freindly. Oh, one thing I think vlad needs to put in as a check is on the talk about when Leina says she has talked to the Barkeep and there is enough hot water. I have gotten that in an Inn, in the forest and in De' Arnise Keep. It should only happen at an Inn or make one for outdoors by a river cause they smell like dirty "stockes". I don't think they started until I was in the Underdark. I will go back and see if they happen in Halruaa. Or it is my PC just has the chrisma. |
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