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Forum Member Posts: 211 Joined: 26-June 05 ![]() |
Thought you might want us to post all the typo and grammer errors in one spot so that whoever is doing the corrections doesn't have to hunt for them posted all over the place.
This only came to after I saw the second one. Also could you tell us how much of the exact text do you need to be able to find and correct it. Here is one. Fake Arundel: Arundel is bleeding......"There is a portal in his room you may use to come back to you world." Wouldn't this be better as "... go back to your world"? Cheers |
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![]() Forum Member Posts: 38 Joined: 24-December 04 From: USA ![]() |
Okay, here's another minor grammar issue. It is when Hrothgar interjects during Jaheira's discovery of Khalid having been killed.
Hrothgar: "I am sorry Jaheira, nothing I say will ease the pain you are feeling at this moment. You need to take time to grieve for your Khalid and then there will be a time when need to talk about him. I did not know him but please know that I am here when that time comes." Suggest change: "You need to take time to grieve for your Khalid and then there will be a time when you'll need to talk about him." |
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