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Forum Member Posts: 211 Joined: 26-June 05 ![]() |
Thought you might want us to post all the typo and grammer errors in one spot so that whoever is doing the corrections doesn't have to hunt for them posted all over the place.
This only came to after I saw the second one. Also could you tell us how much of the exact text do you need to be able to find and correct it. Here is one. Fake Arundel: Arundel is bleeding......"There is a portal in his room you may use to come back to you world." Wouldn't this be better as "... go back to your world"? Cheers |
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![]() Forum Member Posts: 38 Joined: 24-December 04 From: USA ![]() |
Found this seeming grammar problem when in Irenicuses dungeon and experimenting with dropping Hrothgar. Eventually this dialogue is reached:
Hrothgar: "No matter where I wait <charname>, it will only be for a brief time, but if you say and inn or tavern will be more convenient, than that is where you will find me. Just do not leave it too late before you return. I wish you luck in your search for your destiny <charname>. For now I say fare the well and keep safe my friend." I don't understand the "...leave it too late..." portion. How about: "Just do not make it too late before your return."? ![]() |
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