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Forum Member Posts: 211 Joined: 26-June 05 ![]() |
Thought you might want us to post all the typo and grammer errors in one spot so that whoever is doing the corrections doesn't have to hunt for them posted all over the place.
This only came to after I saw the second one. Also could you tell us how much of the exact text do you need to be able to find and correct it. Here is one. Fake Arundel: Arundel is bleeding......"There is a portal in his room you may use to come back to you world." Wouldn't this be better as "... go back to your world"? Cheers |
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Forum Member Posts: 26 Joined: 25-July 05 ![]() |
After getting into Halruaa and entering the main building you have to talk to Xan. When Xan is done talking Hrothgar pops up and says, "You were lucky this time....." One of the PC's possible responses to Hrothgar contains the phrase, "....seeing him stood...". The word stood should be changed to stand.
After giving your response to Hrothgar, you may then follow Xan into the room on the left. Talking to Xan this second time Xan says, "To move a student forward before understanding what has gone before could prove hazardous not any to the student.......". The word any should be changed to only. |
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