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Golden Thief
post Aug 3 2005, 08:01 PM
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Thought you might want us to post all the typo and grammer errors in one spot so that whoever is doing the corrections doesn't have to hunt for them posted all over the place.
This only came to after I saw the second one.
Also could you tell us how much of the exact text do you need to be able to find and correct it.
Here is one.
Fake Arundel: Arundel is bleeding......"There is a portal in his room you may use to come back to you world."
Wouldn't this be better as "... go back to your world"?

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larrienne
post Aug 4 2005, 11:01 AM
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QUOTE(Vlad @ Aug 4 2005, 09:08 AM)
GT, thank you for this thread, but it's better to discuss all language related issues with Larrienne. She's excellent native English writer, and her language is far far away from that of mine.


... but your language skills have taken leaps and bounds Vlad. Writing for this mod has helped you to brush up your English heaps. smile.gif

Golden Thief I'd be happy to help with any grammar issues that have escaped my run through. I realise typo errors are oftem missed when hitting the keyboard at speed, especially as I've never typed in my life until I acquired my first computer some 6yrs ago. In the past, I have always got someone to type up my work up for me.
I was very late coming to this form of technology. Heck...I still write e-mails as if scribing a full letter, I find it hard to keep them brief, more so if writing to friends and family. biggrin.gif Even more infuriating is trying to put a meaning to the letters used to cut short sentences in e's that I recieve from younger members of my family, the most poular example being *BTW*. which of course speaks for itself when used.
Please post all issues you find in this thread Golden Thief. Thanks.

Fake Arundel: Arundel is bleeding......"There is a portal in his room you may use to come back to you world."
Wouldn't this be better as "... go back to your world"?

Vlad, here I agree with Golden Thief, but *IMO*... (another of those letter/ sentences that I do understand biggrin.gif )... it would read even better...
... "There is a portal in his room that you may use to return to your world."

One I missed. sad.gif

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Golden Thief   Typo and Grammer Errors   Aug 3 2005, 08:01 PM
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