Back into the dark pits of the Underdark as the fate of Viconia continues... I want to share an example on how much the comic improves by prune1 from Spellhold Studios with his text edits. In panel one page 54 I first wrote: "Vicona now wandered the Underdark as a lonely fugitive…" but prune1 massively improved the feeling and the drama with his suggestion: "Exiled, and marked for death, Viconia wandered the Underdark. A fugitive amongst her own kind." So give him some cheering and applauds because with his aid the storyline really improves and also cleans it from my 'Swenglish'. My visual edits and his text edits on page 1-52 will be uploaded on a upcoming webpage for the comic. I also want to thank everyone that has given me constructive criticism on both visuals and story content. I have learned much from that and also adapted many changes based on that. Good speed to you all!

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Update: The saga continues; page 56-57, colored on my laptop so the colors looked weird...hopefully it looks ok on your screen
whoever you are. I have also started to use a own created font now.

Credit for layout on page 57 goes to prune 1. I first had the middle panel as the last one without text. prune 1 suggested the current layout that in my mind improved the feeling of the page amazingly!


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This post has been edited by flysoup: Sep 28 2009, 03:12 PM

Hi friends!
The saga continues within the dark pits of the Underdark.
Prune 1 at Spellhold Studios did rewrite the dialogue in panel 4 and it amazingly improved the feeling and quality of the dialogues. Tons of credit for that! I am going to start crafting some intro pages for the comic that will only be presented on the upcoming BG Comic webpage. So the updates will slow down a bit from now on. I hope you all wont forget the comic though because it will start again on a new webpage with a lot of none published pages. I will update some continious pages on the web though but the main focus will be put into the crafting of the upcoming BG Comic page. The comic will be named the Bhaalspawn. So see you soon in a couple of month's on the brand new webpage

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It's been ages since I last checked here, but I see you've been busy. I'll be sure to take a look when I've got a moment to enjoy it.

Hi there friend!

The comic is here for you when you feel for it I am currently in a visual edit process with some of the pages for the upcoming webpage. Ever since prune 1 joined the script editing I have decided to step up a level in the artwork crafting. I hope that shows in the later pages. All the grammatical corrections will be up on the new webpage.

/peace

Visit http://bhaalspawn.com/ my friends!

This post has been edited by flysoup: Mar 25 2010, 11:05 PM

The more buildings looks much better, the shading on Sarevok's nose is better too. I might of just added a bright purple line(s) on the swords blade instead all purple. but that is me.

You are right about the sword, I will look into it. Thanks for the constructive critique!

Here is another edit sampe from the Bhaalspawn comic:

Visual edits by me and script edits by prune1 at Spellhold Studios. (Edit page to the right).

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This post has been edited by flysoup: Oct 27 2009, 02:56 PM

Teaser page of the prologue from the Bhaalspawn comic that will be up on the Bhaalspawn webpage in a near future.
(artwork by me, script by me and prune1)

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Hi, long time no hear aye? Well as I have mentioned my old servant computer dated from the early 90's took his/her last breath. But hear this there is a new small computer in my home now, though I had to connect it with a large monitor. So I can once again start the Bhaalspawn comic together with prune 1 at SHS. Since there has been a massive delay in the website crafting I owe you another teaser page.

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This post has been edited by flysoup: Dec 10 2009, 10:50 PM

your stuff looks real professional. I like the lightning (and the arcane) the white parts really are boldly pronounced

Thank you for the kind and inspiring words!

AAAAaaaaaaGH!!! I see that the last panel on the prologue page has ant in the text frame rather than and...that is what happens when one edits at the late hours when the eyes are blood red and the mind is misty. Forgive me for this, everything will be fixed for the Bhaalspawn website as I will do my best to look over every page twice. It wouldn't be fair otherwise since prune1 has contributed with the writings/edits and other suggestions improving the comic with 200%. And I keep messing it up since I am too eager to share it with you all...So forgive me for this...

Another teaser from the upcoming Bhaalspawn comic website. Remember to thank prune1 at SHS for the excellent writing and script ideas. Bhaalspawn coming in a near future at a website just a few clicks from you! Creators: Michael: artwork/script prune1: script/edits. Thank you all that reads the comic!

(I will post the future teasers in this reply until the Bhaalspawn website is up)

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This post has been edited by flysoup: Dec 29 2009, 12:44 AM

Teasers until it's up? Then let's hope it never goes up!

(Just kidding, of course!)


I can't believe it's been two months since I said I'd look at the comics and I'm just getting around to it now. They look good, as always, especially the recent edits that you've shown. The edit of the gnome/Boo comic seems to steer slightly away from the more comical effect (like the non-circular moon) but it certainly does look more realistic. I assume that's what you're driving at.

I agree to that the page you mention steer away from the overall comic style I have used before. I will try not to be too confusing in my artwork. I guess I am currently trying some new grounds in my art. I am glad that you still pop by to read/watch the Bhaalspawn comic friend!

And here are some more character presentation teasers from the upcoming Bhaalspawn comic website.

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Good speed to you all!

This post has been edited by flysoup: Dec 27 2009, 07:42 PM

Nice work

Thanks friend

So another year is about to be counted away and I hope that you all are well and I look forward and hope to hear from you all next year. Anyway here is Chibi Drizzt with his Chibi Guenhwyvar sending his greetings from the Forgotten Chibi Realms.

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This post has been edited by flysoup: Jan 1 2010, 01:51 AM

Here are some more visual edit samples from the upcoming Bhaalspawn website:

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