My Very First Area Conversions, Comments / Advise Please Options

[Minotaur]

Hi all,

I have posted something like this one other place, let me say that up front.

I find I like making bitmaps For Areas. So many people do portraits I am thinking of trying to carve out a little nitch for Area making. With that said, though I am now working on my own original areas, I started by doing a couple of bitmap coversions (From maps I got here at Blackwyrm, though that section is down now)

So, with that in mind, could I get some comments/suggestions/thots on the two conversions I have made?

The first is a dungeon and I am pretty happy with it, certain sections of the floor and pillers notwithstanding.

The second is a conversion from the Dead Nations (PS:T) and although it is okay, I HATE the long hall branching offf to the right. Needs a bit more..."fluidy" I believe. It looks choppy.

Thots and comments please?

Minotaur

[Minotaur]

photobucket?

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