My Very First Area Conversions, Comments / Advise Please Options

[Minotaur]

Hi all,

I have posted something like this one other place, let me say that up front.

I find I like making bitmaps For Areas. So many people do portraits I am thinking of trying to carve out a little nitch for Area making. With that said, though I am now working on my own original areas, I started by doing a couple of bitmap coversions (From maps I got here at Blackwyrm, though that section is down now)

So, with that in mind, could I get some comments/suggestions/thots on the two conversions I have made?

The first is a dungeon and I am pretty happy with it, certain sections of the floor and pillers notwithstanding.

The second is a conversion from the Dead Nations (PS:T) and although it is okay, I HATE the long hall branching offf to the right. Needs a bit more..."fluidy" I believe. It looks choppy.

Thots and comments please?

Minotaur

[Baronius]

Uploads are enabled, unless the file is very large. In the latter case, you can get FTP if you don't have one, so you can link to your areas.

What file format did you try to upload? Some file types may need to be enabled in the forum software.